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The stranger's avatar

Relevant

Resonate deeply

Specially this

"a freeway to renewed dreams turning generational visions in red,

walled up prison of the mind".

Landed and hit! 🎯

Gary L Taylor's avatar

That was excellent stuff, chilling in how relevant it is. Incredibly well done.

Nimila's avatar

thank you so much for reading and engaging, it means a lot

Virginia Curtis's avatar

This is a powerful piece. Cut to the heart, I am. Grieving for lost ones. Evil birds of prey. Fear is a drone in the sky. I'm ashamed to be in the USA today. Love, Virg

Firefly in the Forest's avatar

Both chilling and excellent, Nimila

Nimila's avatar

Thank you so much for reading and engaging, means a lot to me 💕

MoTy's avatar

This line “a new kind —

brand new birds.

replacing the extinct

bothering the existent “ is absolutely heartbreaking. The fear at core of it all. Smashing piece Nimila, Orwell would have been proud.

Nimila's avatar

what a compliment 🥺💖

James (HVR)'s avatar

Did I miss this one? So fire. So brilliant. Phew!

Vivien Beere's avatar

Flat heart line-hard line

Fake birds in the clearest sky

The eye of the bird

Mm chills.

Nimila's avatar

You are so kind 🌸❤️

Vivien Beere's avatar

I think your writing is great 👍

theinkspilled's avatar

This is pure talent, defiance and raw. The line “imminent precipice giving you access into the abyss which they call liberation” hits bone deep.❤️‍🔥

Nimila's avatar

this means a lot. thank you for reading and engaging ❤️

theinkspilled's avatar

When I feel transported by a piece I just love to share❤️‍🔥