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Suzie's avatar

Oh Nimila🥺 I can feel a dissociative experience all over this, beautiful and heartbreaking 🖤🌷

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Thank you love ❤️

Eugenia P. Frankenberg 🥀's avatar

i love the idea of our souls being hungry. what kind of food feeds them? i wonder. beautiful poem.

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Thank you so much, Eugenia. Happy to inspire some thoughts 🖤

LoudRawRites - LauraWrites's avatar

Ah yes! Are poemas food for the soul? 🤓

Art By Anima's avatar

Wow...to the core. You are an amazing writer! Thank you for this!

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Wow, thank you so much, you are so kind!

Art By Anima's avatar

I'm just being honest :)

Gary L Taylor's avatar

That was great. I think that's one of those that will stay with me a while.

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Thank you so much, your words mean a lot to me.

pie's avatar

so touching dear Nimila ❤️ warm hug!

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Thank you so much 💖

ryv 𓆣 ˚ ✶.'s avatar

oh nimila, the way you weave even the shortest of words so atmospherically with your chosen image always amazes me. the colors you chose and the hunger of a life unlived are images that stick. and i feel the pang along with your italics. wonderful work. 🤍

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Thank you so much for reading and always taking a moment to comment and express your feelings. It means so much to me 💖

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

Wow Nimila this one is incredible! You’ve said sooo much with little words. That ending is striking, I felt it I really did. You’re an amazing artist. Thank you! 💕

Nick Hills's avatar

There is all humanity in your poem, what a great gift to us! Thanks Nimila!

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Thank you so much for your precious words of encouragement, Nick. Truly means a lot coming from you.

Nick Hills's avatar

There is all humanity in your poem, what a great gift to us! Thanks Nimila!

Nicole's avatar

OHHHHHHH when they say Go into the light, they didn't mean the fridge....

Willow's avatar

Love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!